| Date |
Story |
Mike T's comment |
Aquea's response |
Rating |
2/12/2004 |
Its not the Size that Counts - Part 6 |
Great story so far. It goes a little slow for my tastes, but is masterfully written. A very real sort of story, very believable. It revisits a lot of themes that I tend to see in "chick flicks", but the way it's written it never seems boring or a rehash. You have a real talent.
:)
I have lots of suggestions for what I'd like to see more or less of if this were more of a lewd story, but it's not so I'll leave those to myself.
You're doing great. :)
Cheers! |
Call me a "chick flick" kind of girl! Go ahead, say
it. You know you want to. |

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